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Text Messaging (Daniel W. K. Lee - New Orleans, LA)

  


I. Situations: a play

 

Scene 1

 

Me: Where are you?

 

You: You back?

 

Me: Miss me?

 

You: Terribly.

 

 

Scene 2

 

Me (drunk): Where are you now?

 

You (back from Buffalo): Miss me?

 

Me (back from nowhere): Is it a question

                                         when you already 

     know the answer?

 

     (seconds later):  You gave me

        no other choice.

                                [message not sent]

 

 

II. Excerpts

 

Amor de mis entrañas, viva muerte,

en vano espero tu palabra escrita

pienso con la flor que se marchita

que si vivo sin quiero perderte.

*

And parted the shirt from my bosom-bone, and plunged your tongue to my bare-stript heart

 

           *

 

In your stray moments, as now in

mine, may what was not

rise like grief before you.

 

*

 

From poems I read earlier. Made me

think of you, sorry.

[message not sent]

 

 

III. Proofreading

 

a) Never b sorry! Just tell me 

   what ur referring too.

 

b) Cuter

   Cutey

 

c) Awsome.

   You to lover..

 

d) In more ways

   then one

 

 

Notes on the Text

 

Excerpt 1: from “Amor de mis entrañas, viva muerte…” by Federico García Lorca

 

Excerpt 2: from “Song of Myself” by Walt Whitman

 

Excerpt 3: from “Luggage” by Frank Bidart

Prelude to a Breakup

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