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The Last Day at Monterey Bay (J. Michael Norris - Baton Rouge, LA)

 


         

            On her last day at Punta Monterey Beach Resort, Samena arrives to the shore just after sunrise, earlier than usual. A thick fog covers the bay, so it will stay murky for another hour or so. Samena doesn’t mind; she likes the mystery. Most of her novels had been suspense, with a few failed attempts at romance. Wrapped in an oversized towel stolen from her hotel cabin, she wanders onto the beach barefoot, hoping to find seashells hiding in the sand. Early birds don’t just get worms, Samena thinks, laughing at her own cliché. Cool mist swirls around her face.

        Her foot falls upon something hard in the softness. She stops, pulls her toes back, and carefully bends over to pluck a perfect nautilus shell from the damp sand. Even in the dim light, its pearlescent white and beige glisten.

             Well, Howard,” she says to the fog, “was it the Fibonacci sequence these follow? A golden spiral or some such?” She smiles at her feigned ignorance, crinkling her nose in a way she found cute when she was younger. Now, it scrunches her face into a mess of wrinkles. “Oh darling, I’ve screwed up and gotten old.” Her grip tightens around the nautilus.

Her husband Howard, a retired physics professor, died from skin cancer three years ago, after a few errant cells left his epidermis to visit his liver. He once taught Samena how to calculate the load a bridge could hold for a novel she was writing. She once taught Howard how much forgiveness a heart could hold after he’d slept with a research assistant named Jackie. Such an unremarkable girl.

His death left Samena alone with their small fortune and a wayward son in debt and on drugs. Some sort of speed, she’s sure of that, but at eighty-three she no longer cares about unnecessary details. Fifty-five should be old enough to get his act together. They’d done their best. Nannies. Tutors. Private schools in upstate New York. Even several stays at those expensive rehabs down in Florida. She often wonders if they’d just made things worse.  

“Brennan is coming to put me in a home today,” she tells the fog. “Says I’ve gone mad.”

Their only child decided Samena’s two years living in a hotel’s beach cabin proved her incompetence. He’d sobered up long enough to convince a judge to agree. Later this afternoon, he would come to collect her.

“Don’t worry, Howard,” Samena says. “I’m prepared.”

Something wet wiggles against the palm of her hand, and she flips the nautilus over in time to see brown tentacles retreating into the shell’s opening. A rush of warm joy swells through her.

“I didn’t know you were in there!” She brings the shell to her mouth and kisses the smooth surface. “Holmes wrote a poem about you,” she whispers, then tosses the nautilus into the waves.

Buoyed by such luck on her last day here, Samena jogs briskly back to her cabin, stopping for a moment to tease Howard one final time. “You didn’t say a thing, darling. I could have killed the poor creature.”

***

By noon, the sun has heated the bay enough that the fog has lifted. Samena curls herself on a deck chair, watching waterspouts spray up in the distance, followed by the backs of blue whales. Two seagulls on the beach below fight over something in the sand. Brennan should be coming soon, but Samena doesn’t mind. She has her plan.

Breathing deeply, briny air fills her lungs, tinged with the taste of seaweed. The bay seems to stretch on into infinity, rippling like a mirage near the horizon. Reaching into a crystal candy dish she filled with pills, Samena fishes out another Valium, placing it carefully in her mouth. She lost count somewhere around twenty-five. A child’s voice calls from beyond the dunes, searching for his mother. Maybe she’s gone into hiding, Samena thinks, then swallows down the Valium with a large sip from her fourth glass of chardonnay, a 2012 Michel Gahier she adores.

She closes her eyes and listens to the waves lapping the shore. In. Out. In. Out. A soft breeze caresses her face. Somewhere far away, a seagull cries. Her body feels light, floating.

Samena clears her throat.

“Howard, I’m ready.”

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