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I’m Letting Her Go (Louis Toliver Jr-Swartz, LA)


Even though it is hard
At the end of the day
It is time to play this card
I am certain it is okay

She was never good for me
She led me into dark places
I know that I could barely see
Searching for human graces

I ran to her for her love
She made me think of comfort
Never touched me with a glove
Now I rip her off like a wart

It feels good to know her way
It feels good I know more
She can no longer make me stay
I am no longer her whore

…I’m letting her go. Finallly.

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